This is the link to my practice IOC
Criteria A - 5 - I showed adequate knowledge of the text by zooming in and out often. I also used quotes as much as I could to support my point or to make a point.
Criteria B -5 - There was some awareness of literary features, but the understandings on the reader were known.
Criteria C - 3 - The structure was generally organized, and mostly coherent. It was a tad jumpy but I went from point to point.
Criteria D - 4 - The register was appropriate, and effective for the task. The language is also clear, and appropriate for the given task.
